Thanks for joining the Metatalta community - Welcome aboard.
I can truthfully say, as I read through Metatalta, I felt I was 21 again, visualizing my first E.E. Doc Smith cover.
If your intention was to write a 70s style SF book - you've cracked it - 100%. I just had to read it right through to the end.
It reads like "fun", enthusiasm, and I assume, created with passion. Of course, I admit, I'm totally biased, because it conjured up memories for me, of unfettered creativity.
Peter Andrew Jones -
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